Divergent series book 3 "Allegiant" rewrite

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#26

2014-02-18 00:54

She can always write a 4th book. It's easy to bring characters back to life.

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#27

2014-04-04 02:00

She made cry she keeps peter alive like really I love her and her books but that I was like if I read allegiant my life was over so I went to look at characters and I read under tris and I saw allegiant I was like scroll but my eyes had alreAdy seen that she died and I cried after

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#28

2014-04-08 09:08

I absolutely hate the way allegient ended , at the end of the day the author cannot make everyone happy because that would pull her in a lot of direction regarding the story , however I think every reader would agree with the fact that they did not want tris to die , the end did not have to be all sunshine and roses , but just for the sake of those who followed and read the books and have such passion for them , she should rewrite the ending.

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#29

2014-04-09 17:49

I want trice to live

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#30

2014-04-14 10:21

Allegiant broke my heart
angel

#31

2014-04-17 20:21

I honestly can't believe that she killed tris. The amount of near death experiences tris had already faced, what was the point of everything?! Caleb got to live when he was a traitor?! He was willing to see his sister die 'for the greater good?!' so can someone explain to me what the whole point of tris journey was, if she was going to die anyway? She may as well have died when she jumped from the moving car to the building on choosing day, instead of falling in love with tobias, and making friends with christina. It was bad enough that she had killed Uriah, but tris as well? Sure, now future generations dont have to choose a faction, nor do they have to hide their divergence, but I don't care BECAUSE THERE WILL NEVER BE ANY TOBIAS AND TRIS BABIES. I can't stand when divergent is compared to the hunger games, but do you see how everything basically worked out for katniss and peeta? Sure, there were deaths, but the two main characters got to grow old together, have kids, and move on with their lives. Tris didn't have to die for their to be a better world. She survived the death serum, she would have lived if david hadn't of shot her. It was such an unnecessary ending. This petition is truly a great idea, but veronica won't re write it. So, the best advice i can give you is FORGET ABOUT THIS BOOK, GO AND FIND A REALLY GOOD FANFICTION ENDING WHEN TRIS SURVIVED THE ACCIDENT, SHE'S IN A COMA AND SHE IS PREGNANT WITH A BABY THEN SHE WAKES UP AND FOUR AND TRIS LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER.
E.A

#32 Re:

2014-04-24 02:48

#31: angel -

Thank you, you made my day with this comment. I truely feel this way too. Thats why i created this petition. For fans like us.


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#33

2014-04-28 07:37

I really don't want Tris to die at the end. That's the part I'm hoping to be changed.
Sierra

#34 Tris

2014-04-28 07:38

I DONT WANT TRIS TO DIE!! That's all I ask of u Veronica. Nothing more, nothing less. :)

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#35

2014-05-11 01:09

Please Veronica you have to rewrite this book. I know life is not fair and trust me you really showed us that. But please rewrite the book. It could be amazing and if you do your series will still be big and it will stay in our minds. Believe me. But please please bring tris back!!!!!!!

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#36

2014-05-17 16:38

I love Tris and Tobias. Tris can't die!!!!!!!!! I need there to be a happily-ever-after.


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#37

2014-05-24 02:38

. There are too many inner circles and wheels and twists . I am a big science fiction fans and also a masters in psychotherapy, none of this plot nor the characters seem plausible in the last book. The whole theme should be redone. The DNA does not make sense and has the author consulted with scientists? Perhaps there can be other cities with different factions and these cities were at war. Frank Herbert's dune series has this same theme of breeding to find a person who is not easily manipulated. It should not be about DNA but merely to keep people isolated. I hope this third book will be completely rewritten

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#38

2014-05-25 21:58

Ms. Veronica, Tris' death served absolutely no purpose and yes, it makes us feel like you have wasted all our precious time and hopes. It is one of the most capturing books I've ever read, this coming from an avid reader, and you would literally be changing my life. Please, have mercy.

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#39

2014-05-30 03:12

Neeed an alternate ending...

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#40

2014-06-12 15:46

Veronica!!!! You really disappointed me. This ending was not good. Tris needed to live for all the people that died. She had a future with Tobias. I am not longer a fan unless you re write the end so she lives. I was amazed by the first two but disgusted with the last.
Teal penguin

#41 Tris and Uriah living

2014-06-23 20:08

I think that Tris should live and their are things she could have done better like bring a gun and choke the guy. Please consider changing the Allegiant move ending. Let's make a petition and send it to Veronica Roth. We can always write our own alternate ending though. I also think Uriah should live. Please consider this.
Teal penguin

#42 Re: good ending

2014-06-23 20:11

I like that ending. I'll talk to my friends and see if we can write it together. I know they didn't like the endig

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#44

2014-06-23 20:18

I hate the ending
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#47

2014-06-25 14:20

Totally disappointed with the 3rd book. I've told my friends not to even read because it would just waist their time.
Windchimed

#48 Seconding the fanfiction suggestion

2014-07-08 00:52

I agree with many of the comments posted here. Obviously, Roth has the right to tell her story her way, but just as obviously, readers have the right to dislike it and to be as vocal about that as they want. Personally, I felt that "Allegiant" was weak in many ways. It lacked character development and was very inconsistent with the first two books (in both the plot and the characterizations). To me, it ended up feeling like a spin-off book rather than the conclusion to the trilogy.

That said, I really don't expect Roth to write a fourth book or an alternate ending. I'll sign the petition on the one-in-a-thousand chance that she listens, but she seems to be happy with "Allegiant," and I really doubt anything will change that.

Because of that, I'll second the person above who suggested fanfiction. There are probably close to 100 "happy ending" fanfics out there that assume the first part of "Allegiant" took place but have Tris survive and go on to finish the story from there. There are also at least a few fanfics that pick up at the end of "Insurgent" with a completely original third book. I wrote one called "Determinant" that you're welcome to check out if you're interested (it's under the pen-name Windchimed, so search on "Windchimed Determinant" and it will come up). Reading some of those might help you feel better about the trilogy. (And no, we don't make any money off fan-fiction, so while it probably sounds self-serving for me to mention my story here, I don't gain anything whether or not you read it. :-)

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#49

2014-09-04 23:43

Im very glad that this petition exists. The ending of book 3 of the divergent trilogy is horrible. No ofense to veronoca roth, she is a great author until the ending of that particular book. I ;and im sure pretty much every other person who read this book, agree that tris shouldnt die. So please rewrite the book with a better ending.

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#50

2014-10-06 05:15

I totally agree. I was really disappointed with Allegiant and I still am. I really hope Roth would come again with the ending or write a sequel to it in which Tris is back, alive. Thanks.